Notes:
Yay, the honeymoon! So! Regular warnings apply here: this is a very
explicit chapter, and beyond that, there’s fisting, so if that’s not your thing
or is a trigger or you just don’t like the thought of it, skip the second half
of this post. I’m thinking we’ve just
got one more post after this, lovers.
Paradise will soon be coming to an end.
But never fear! I’m plotting out
a new serial story for the new year.
More news on that next time.
Title: Paradise
Part Twenty-A: Oh, The Things We’ll Do
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Jonah
wasn’t an exhibitionist, but he appreciated the fact that Garrett could
be. Garrett was gorgeous, flirtatious
and unabashedly hedonistic, and all of that…all of that energy and passion was
Jonah’s now. Their marriage was a
commitment to each other, but it also meant that they were going to have to go
deep to figure out how to make each other happy, over and over and over, for
the rest of their lives. When it came to
sex Jonah had never done much more than, well, fucking. Making love,
depending on who he was with and what they were doing, but hands and mouths and
cocks and…just the body. Just the other
person’s body and his own.
Jonah
knew that Garrett was a lot more used to using technology in the bedroom, or
the living room, or the zero-grav room or wherever he happened to be having
sex, but this house went beyond a novel location or a new toy. This house could plunge you right into the
realm of different temperatures and electricity and altered states and
extravisual stimulation and elastimaterial surfaces and toys…honestly, it was
way too much, but Garrett was good at introducing it little by little.
Like
in the pool. Jonah didn’t even know that
there was something other than regular water that you could swim in, but
apparently there was, and it existed in this house.
“Check
this out,” Garrett grinned, positioning Jonah in one corner of the pool. He reached out to the edges and pressed a button
on either side, and all of a sudden Jonah was almost completely immobile. The water felt thick, like he was trapped in clay.
“Okay?”
Garrett asked him. “Not too
claustrophobic?”
“No,”
Jonah said, giving up straining after a moment.
His skin tingled a little, but apart from that the water was still the
same temperature and clung to him just as intimately, it just…wasn’t the same
viscosity. “How does this stuff even
exist?”
“Nanotechnology,”
Garrett grinned. “Gotta love it. And the best thing is, it holds you down
because it’s attuned to this part of the pool, but it doesn’t have any effect
on me. Stay here for a second.” He pulled himself out of the pool and walked
out of Jonah’s line of sight.
“Yeah,
ha-ha, like I can go anywhere,” Jonah groused.
“Aw,
baby, don’t be like that.” Garrett
slipped back into the pool, wearing a thin pair of gloves and something over
his nose that Jonah actually recognized.
“Rebreather?”
“The
nasal version, because I want to be able to use my mouth,” Garrett told
him.
“And
the gloves?”
“They
have a very particular pulse effect in this kind of water. Let me show you,” Garrett said with a smile. He dipped his left hand under the water and
made a slight pushing motion toward Jonah.
And the water rippled…and it felt like Jonah’s whole midsection was
being gently bombarded by a thousand tiny waves, just barely sharp-edged before
they dissipated against his flesh.
“Oh…fuck.”
“I
know.” Garrett changed the angle of his
hand and slowly snapped his fingers, and a tighter, squeezing sensation crawled
up Jonah’s chest and over his nipples before ending at the waterline.
“Fuck.”
“And
that would be so much fun, but I want to suck you. If you don’t like anything, just say stop
loudly and I’ll hear you.” Before Jonah could
say anything else Garrett sank into the water and leaned forward, moving
effortlessly through the liquid until his lips wrapped around Jonah’s cock.
Jonah
hadn’t been hard when the water had locked him into place, and he’d wondered
how he’d be able to when his entire body was in stasis, but inside of Garrett’s
mouth he could swell and expand. He
groaned at the feel of Garrett’s tongue caressing him, rubbing ruthlessly along
his shaft, and he tried to spread his legs wider, then cursed.
Garrett
moved his hands, and frissons of shivering water cascaded up Jonah’s legs and
hips, and god he just wanted to twitch away from it, but he couldn’t move. It wasn’t his favorite, but he wasn’t about
to tell Garrett to stop it, either.
But
Garrett knew what Jonah liked better than he could articulate for himself, and
the next waves that washed up his body were like slow, rolling embraces,
feathering off at the top into a light, pattering touch, and Jonah had no idea
how his husband was doing that, but he loved it.
Garrett
kept Jonah’s cock in his mouth, until the head touched the back of his throat
and even then, he just hummed and swallowed and made Jonah see stars. When he did finally pull back to the head
with his lips, swirling his tongue in greedy circles, the stillness he was trapped
in reminded Jonah that he wasn’t going to be able to move his hips, no matter
how hard he tried to. No thrusting, no
reaching down and grabbing, just Garrett having him however he wanted him. It was a relaxing realization, actually, and
Jonah let his head tilt back against the pillow of water behind him and let his
husband do what he wanted.
What
Garrett wanted, apparently, was to up the ante.
Jonah felt Garrett’s palm settle between this thighs and then gentle
pulses of water started to push upward, pressing rhythmically against his
perineum. It was like a massage, and
coupled with the rolling sensation that Garrett was somehow keeping up and the
warmth and eager pressure against his cock, it was just about as much sensory
overload as Jonah could handle. He was so
hard and ready, but he couldn’t give himself any relief, Jonah knew he was
going to be coming on Garrett’s schedule and no one else’s.
Fortunately, Garrett didn’t like to keep him hanging when he
couldn’t hear Jonah begging for release.
He moved his hand again, and this time a gloved finger actually pressed
against Jonah’s hole, slowly circling, swirling the water around it, and his
other hand wrapped around the base of Jonah’s cock and jacked him fast, the
first fast thing he’d experienced since being locked in place. Jonah groaned a hard exhalation and came
slowly, achingly, his balls held in place by the static water, no tight rush to
speed things along.
By the time the stars had faded from his vision, Garrett was
standing again, the rebreather was gone and he was kissing Jonah hard. “You’re so good to me,” he said, the words
tripping over themselves to get out as they kissed again and again. “You’ll do anything I want, won’t you? You’ll do anything I ask of you.”
“Seems that way,” Jonah managed, kissing him back a few times. “Though I’d kinda like to stretch my
shoulders out, darling.”
“Right.” Garrett hit
the buttons again and the hold suddenly released, and Jonah slumped into
Garrett’s arms. “Are you okay?”
“I feel great,” Jonah told him, “but you feel like you could
use somethin’, sweetheart.”
“Mm, yeah.” Garrett
kissed him again, then peeled the gloves off and set them next to the
rebreather on the side of the pool. “I
could really go for fucking you right now.”
Jonah stretched lazily, then wrapped his legs around Garrett’s
waist. “Then maybe you should.”
“Oh, I think I absolutely should,” Garrett agreed. “Did you know I can change the viscosity of
this water to be more like a lubricant?”
And then he did. It
was a little hard to hold, but completely worth it.
Sometimes it was like that, strange and new and novel, and
other times all Jonah wanted was to be wrapped up under the blankets with his
husband, holding onto each other and only each other, no eyes on them, no house
watching them, nothing but them. They
got plenty of both of those things over the first two days, a marathon of
exhausting, satiating, mind-blowing sex.
The
last night they were in the house, they went for a compromise, something novel
but needing nothing more than the two of them.
For the last night of their honeymoon, Garrett decided he wanted to be
fisted. Tonight there was nothing beyond
Jonah’s hand, Garrett’s ass and a hell of a lot of slick, no vibrating gloves
or pressure point work. Nothing but
Garrett on his back, and Jonah completely transfixed as his fourth finger slid
into his lover’s body.
“Yesss…”
Garrett hissed, arching his back a little.
He wasn’t pulling away but he wasn’t pushing down either, not like he
had with the first three, and Jonah waited, patient but trembling with a need
he hadn’t even realized existed before now.
He wanted to see it, see all of his hand inside of his husband. He still couldn’t quite believe that it would
all fit in there.
“You’re
sure,” he began, his voice dwindling as he slowly punched his fingers
deeper. Garrett groaned.
“I’m—yes,”
he gasped. “Yes. More.”
“Not
yet.” He was still so tight. Jonah moved his hand gingerly, pressed a kiss
to Garrett’s abdomen and was almost surprised that he couldn’t see the outline
of his own fingers beneath him, they felt so deep now. And they had more to go. He added more lube, then gently brought his thumb
into position and pushed in again.
Garrett shuddered and squeezed his eyes shut. “God…”
“Tell
me,” Garrett urged him. “Tell me what it
looks like.”
Garrett
was, unsurprisingly, very good at dirty talk.
Jonah didn’t have near the sort of practice his lover had, viewing
talking as more of a distraction than anything else, but he could see how hot
it got Garrett, and that made him appreciate it more and more. “Looks so stretched, darlin’…your skin’s so
tight around me.” He pulled his thumb
back and rubbed the edge of the tight ring, and Garrett moaned
appreciatively. “Can’t believe you can
do this, sweetheart, you’re amazing.”
“I
can take more,” Garrett said, “I can take all of it. I want all of you.”
“You
sure, darlin’?” Jonah asked, always playing it safe despite his desire to be
all the way in.
“Yes,” Garrett insisted, and that was all
Jonah needed. He tucked his thumb in
close, pushed slowly but didn’t stop, not until his knuckles slipped past the
ring and his hand, his whole hand, was inside of his husband. Garrett gasped and clenched tight around his
wrist and it was all Jonah could do not to come, untouched, right there. The way this looked was ridiculously hot to
him, and he couldn’t tear his eyes away.
He couldn’t even consider it.
“You’re
so good, darlin’,” Jonah said, leaning in and kissing his stomach, watching
avidly as Garrett’s cock responded to the pressure of his whole hand inside of
him, the faint twists and turns rubbing constantly over his prostate. Garrett had gotten a little soft for a
minute, but he was coming back now.
“Just
good for you,” Garrett groaned, smiling a little. “I’m a bitch to everyone else, just ask them.”
“No
you’re not, you’re always perfect.”
“Love
must mean—oh, mm—a short memory.”
Jonah
acknowledged that with an absent nod, but he didn’t stop moving, he couldn’t
stop watching Garrett writhe on his hand.
“How d’you feel?”
“So
full,” Garrett said breathlessly, “and I know it’s already enough but I want
more, I wish you could put your dick in me and fuck me with that at the same
time. I want to feel you inside of me
all the time, I never want you to go. I
want you to fuck me until I’m loose and empty and helpless and then I want you
to do it again, I want you to use me for everything you need.”
“Yeah?” Very slowly, Jonah curled his fingers
together into a fist, and then he rubbed the knobs of his knuckles right across
Garrett’s prostate. His husband’s eyes
widened and his mouth opened, and the sound that came out was so low and
pitiful someone might have thought he was dying if he hadn’t been coming all
over his chest. That view, Garrett
wide-eyed and helpless, was enough to send Jonah over the edge and he with just
one stroke of his hand over his cock he came as well, across the foot of the
bed.
Getting
out was another slow and careful affair, but after a few minutes they were both
clean, tired and Garrett was using Jonah as a body pillow. “So,” Garrett said sleepily, “are you ready
to go back to reality?”
“Don’t
suppose we have much of a choice,” Jonah replied. “And I am ready to see Cody. Think he missed us?”
“What,
in between the bouts of outrageous spoiling that everyone is lavishing on him? Maybe,” Garrett said. “But I’m betting he didn’t miss us while he
was riding around in a tank.”
“You
think he’s gonna do okay, adapting back to a normal life?”
“He’ll
do fine. Cody is pretty happy wherever
he ends up.” Garrett tilted his head up
and caught Jonah’s gaze. “Will you?”
“I’ll
be fine,” Jonah grinned. “I like our new
normal.”
Well, I have to say I'm sad Paradise is coming to an end because you KNOW how much I love Garrett, Jonah and Cody. This was a great chapter, and it felt like a honeymoon after all the drama the guys have gone through. But I'll be looking forward to whatever you write for us.
ReplyDeleteI'm happy you've stuck with me, girl:) I hope the next story will be as interesting. I will be sorry to say goodbye to my boys, but there's always potential for more in the future.
DeleteExcellent chapter as always! I am sad that this story is wrapping up but I feel like our heroes are in a good place in their lives :-)
ReplyDeleteI am SO looking forward to the next serial! Hooray!
I'm looking forward to it too! In part because I'm trying to read the future and figure out what I'm going to decide to do retrospectively! Harder than it looks. Expect an email:)
DeleteA couple days ago, I read the entire Paradise series in one sitting. It was glorious, and I miss the guys already. The idea of the honeymoon house was very inventive, probably prophetic and a little scary. Great job, sister.
ReplyDeleteWow, way to dedicate! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I'd love to spend some time in that honeymoon house. Thanks for reading:)
DeleteOh my god! This is fantastic! You are definitely very...creative ;) loved this chapter! I am soooo gonna miss these boys. Your publisher is going to love you, all this originality and creativity!
ReplyDeleteScottie
Thank you, Scottie darlin', I try:)
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