tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8088762026814565807.post9067218892151096521..comments2023-07-06T06:29:58.181-07:00Comments on The Fictional Life of Cari Z: Love Letters Post #4Cari Zhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17156330866753346990noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8088762026814565807.post-50935896124849421412013-02-17T11:52:26.973-08:002013-02-17T11:52:26.973-08:00Hey Avid, I'm glad you're loving it:) I h...Hey Avid, I'm glad you're loving it:) I hope it'll keep growing on you.<br /><br />CariCari Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17156330866753346990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8088762026814565807.post-46802315327519299782013-02-17T08:53:31.222-08:002013-02-17T08:53:31.222-08:00I both love and hate the slow build-up of this sto...I both love and hate the slow build-up of this story. I am loving this almost as much as your Pandora stories. I look forward to more. AvidReadrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02114995430907573858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8088762026814565807.post-39496152460396136582013-02-13T14:26:53.112-08:002013-02-13T14:26:53.112-08:00I did! I was tired and didn't want to screw t...I did! I was tired and didn't want to screw things up! But it will get better:)Cari Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17156330866753346990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8088762026814565807.post-31702907010584818292013-02-13T14:26:24.054-08:002013-02-13T14:26:24.054-08:00Yeah, Cheryl is a decidedly imperfect person, but ...Yeah, Cheryl is a decidedly imperfect person, but I'll explain her particular ire at some point. And Brody was kind of an odd dude. I'll explain that too. Thanks for reading, hon!Cari Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17156330866753346990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8088762026814565807.post-49803980976671459082013-02-12T21:00:32.106-08:002013-02-12T21:00:32.106-08:00No, you didn't just end it there!! I await th...No, you didn't just end it there!! I await the next post with much anticipation.Elyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00434008106885681875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8088762026814565807.post-83105353376740898102013-02-12T17:02:35.922-08:002013-02-12T17:02:35.922-08:00Loved this post, hated Cheryl. Glad she will be mi...Loved this post, hated Cheryl. Glad she will be minor character :-) Other than the witchy widow, Brody's family seemed sweet. Its odd that Brody didn't mention more about Ryan in his correspondence with Ben. I guess the next part will shed some light on that and other little mysteries. <br /><br />Well done on this part!Tiffanyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04688020008993065589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8088762026814565807.post-35161291971576123152013-02-12T13:25:47.189-08:002013-02-12T13:25:47.189-08:00Oh crap, honey! Good catch! Yes, I went ahead an...Oh crap, honey! Good catch! Yes, I went ahead and changed that, it should have read Ryan, not Ben. Arg. Thank you.<br /><br />Cheryl's definitely got issues. All will be revealed, but fortunately for our men, she's a very minor character in our story.Cari Zhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17156330866753346990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8088762026814565807.post-63033968129194457692013-02-12T12:57:44.761-08:002013-02-12T12:57:44.761-08:00Hi Cari, I loved it as usual.
First a big-small t...Hi Cari, I loved it as usual.<br /><br />First a big-small thing. Where you first tell us about Ryan read Brody's letter about him, I think you meant Ryan but put in Ben in several spots.<br /><br />I went back and reread the previous three chapters trying to find something I missed about Cheryl to explain her dislike. So Ben was in love with Brody and called him his soulmate. Hmm.<br /><br />Did Brody tell Cheryl that Ben is gay and she's homophobic? Or did Brody reciprocate Ben's feelings without ever revealing it to him and she found out? Or was she simply jealous over the time and energy Brody put into the friendship and the pleasure he got out of it?<br /><br />I am just dying to find out what insight into Brody's personality he shared with his brother that is going to rock Ben's world and how it translates into him falling in love with Ryan- because we know he will.Cliffgirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13190642812066785364noreply@blogger.com